Here’s something I’m not really sure how to write.
At the end of the previous scene, my protagonist was knocked out by a blow to the back of the head.
So now, I have to describe having him wake up.
Wondering if something like this is the idea?
Hero became aware of a low rumbling in his head.
Everything was black.
As hero strained his ears, the rumbling turned into a voice saying: “… trying to muscle in on our racket.”
The blackness started lightening to a gray haze.
Hero blinked his eyes with a flutter, and the gray haze became a gray ceiling.
The voice said, “Look, he’s coming around.”
A second voice said, “I’ll get the boss.”